Wednesday, 22 January 2014

Feedback From Film Magazine Draft 2...

  • Skyline needs to fill up more of the top line
  • Include another image on the page
  • Say who John Carpenter is
  • Make the "Why" bigger in the anchorage text
  • Make the sell lines snapier
  • Make title bigger
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