Above is some of the feedback that I recieved from a group of my target audience.
General Feedback:
The general feedback was that they really liked the trailer and wanted to see the whole film.
The reasons why they liked it was because they felt scared, which is how I wanted the audience to react. A lot of the feedback was that there was suspense within my trailer and that it was mysterious, which I think was because the man's face is never seen.They also liked the music and sound effects.
Looking at all of the feedback, their favourite part about it is when the man walks slowly down the coridoor and there is the sound of a heart beat. I am really pleased as this part is at the end of the trailer and so is more likely to leave a lasting impression on the audience.
Constructive Criticism:
One person said that there should be a high pitched scream. I do not want to include this as my genre is thriller and so I think this would make the film seem like a horror.
Another person said that the main actress should look more scared. I do not want to do this as I wanted the character to seem more anxious rather scared as I wanted to challenge the conventions of a typical girl in a thriller film.
It was suggested that the man in the trailer held an axe. Again, this is a convention of a horror, where the antagonist has a weapon. There is a fine line between horror and thriller that I did not want to cross.
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